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7 Responses
  1. Anonymous Says:

    wwa...yacha ek khoop sundar gaana hou shakata changala music milala tar.


  2. Ganyachya drushtine wrutt jara kami shabdancha ahe asa watatay. :-) But thanks..


  3. Anonymous Says:

    wrutta baddal far knowledge nahie, pan 'tu teva tashi' he gana pan kami shabdatala ahe na, mhanun tasa watala.. :-)


  4. :-) Kharay. Gani tashi khup ahet. Tu tewha tashi pekshahi lahan olinchi sangayachi zali tar "nako nako re paawasa" ani "ye re ghana" hee sangata yetil. Pan tya shabdabcha potential pan mazya shabdanpeksha khup jast ahe. I am nothing as compared to them. :-)


  5. Anonymous Says:

    :-) Poet's modesty is more powerful than his words. pan kharach khoop sundar feel milala ya kavitetun. 'pusale kajal' pashi thech laglyasarakha vachak thambato ani punha pahilyapasun kavita vachawlyashiway rahat nahi. mag barakawe kalu lagtat..mahanoranchya kavitetala 'hirawa raan' nahiye he...kiwwa gres chya pawasachya 'shrungaracha anunay' karanara gana nahiye he...janu kahi mag ata 'najaretala vadalach' sangu shakel nakki kay te..karan yatala swar ani sur khoop kholatun ala ahe...ani jiteh sur ahe tithe kuthe tari gana aselahi...khoop dhanyawad ya kavitesathi!! :-)


  6. Much obliged for your kind words (I know it sounds a bit formal but I dont know what else to say). I am really overwhelmed.. :-)


  7. Anonymous Says:

    :-) Keep it up!!